Gravitos (updated)

[Gravitos Imperium]

So, Gravitos here was scrapped for the longest time. Damn writers block -_- Anways, after recovering from that and re-viewing his profile I wasn't entirely satisfied, ecspecially his backstory and his weapons. I added this whole Gyro Emerald, which is like a Chaos Emerald but with gravity energy (explained in the backstory.) In addition, I gave him a completely new backstory. It's still rather fresh from my mind, and with things usually fresh from my mind, may have a couple problems.

Staff, you know what to do

[Dr. Robotnik]

Sorry for taking so long to look at this. For a fanfic the backstory would be great, but I'd have to wonder about how it would fit into the roleplay's story.

I feel "ehhh" about him being a clone of Sonic and this new Gyro Emerald being one of the original Chaos Emeralds. The old backstory wasn't as epic, but I liked the simpler explanations as to how Gravitos came about.

[Terrador Bellator]

Well, this backstory is a slightly modified version of his actual backstory, in which it was a whole Chaos Emeralds. I tried and fit in with this roleplay by making it a couple shards, eneough to make a duplicate emerald. I'll try and see if there's anything I can do to better the problem.

Also, I wouldn't call it a clone, but something similar. Clone is an exact copy, am I right. This was my attempt to explain why he formed into a hedgehog and not some other Mobian creature. I honestly couldn't think of any other species to give this ability to. Plus with all the cliche speed based and adventure loving hedgehog fan characters out there, I wanted to try and make a decently original one lol. I couldn't explain how he bacame a hedgehog any other way: unless of course I made it a random hedgehog he got the genes from.

Lastly, his abilities are slight edited if you hadn't noticed already. Are all those good?

[Rose Fox]

Well besides the background stuff, the abilties are okay with me.

[Terrador Bellator]

Hmm, well this is new. Abilities I can easily edit, but I'm not so sure about the backstory. Right now I'm thinking about just not using this character for the forum. I don't see what I would do with him anyways.

That being said, this does leave me with on more available character slot. I have 3 now and I beleive the rules allow 4. So, since I'm using my phone right now, I'll be making the profiles when I get on a computer. I'm considering playing as Silver the hedgehog, one of my newest favorite characters, or Nack the weasel. He's an old favorite of mine and I think he'd bring interesting aspects to the RP. The only problem I see using him is RPing with an Austrailian accent XD