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Daichi the Jackrabbit
10-23-2009, 12:23 PM
Post: #1
Daichi the Jackrabbit
Name:
Daichi Nagano
Age:
18
Sex:
M
Species:
Anthropomorphic Jackrabbit
Appearance:
Not really looking apart from the usual weird "human animal" he is not truly worlds apart. Having brownish red fur, he does look rather weird in the eyes of others, and after all, a jackrabbit being much taller than regular rabbits, hes actually much taller than such examples of Cream, Tails, and even Sonic but not Vector, or Big.

He looks like a rabbit, and has short brownish red ears, fingerless gloves, and a headband. He wears sandals, strapped and black, with his large feet, because he couldn't find any shoes, the sandals however are extremely durable, since he does use kicks as a weapon, and his legs are his main weapons. He can be seen as someone with a great martial arts, thanks to what he wears.

Now to his body; His arms are very strong, to the point where he uses them to do an array of movements and skills, and create more versatile situations, so much so that he can easily stay in a one-handed position for a great amount of time. His legs of course re also very strong despite the way he looks, kinda how Knuckles arms are strong but also don't seem it. He can also do aerial maneuvers and flips as well with ease.
Personality:
A strong spirited fellow of a greater will than most people account for he is someone who places his views and principles over all other things, no matter what he is a one that lives his own way, doing what he wants to do no matter what others might think of him for doing so. He is one to easily hold a grudge over others even in the midst of battling another person in doing so.

Usually one that does things completely different than others may anticipate, he is often seen as an unpredictable dumb-ass, this also usually saves him however as when it comes to fighting, combat and battling, he is a genius, though he often doesn't seem it, he is always thinking of different ways to defeat his opponents, and is not afraid to run away but only if his comrades shall die.

He is often seen as "too dumb for his own good" often being oblivious to the simplest of concepts and is seen with a blank stare or an idiotic scratch on the head. He is also very firm in his words and is often willing to speak his mind against or towards something he does or doesn't like. He isn't very mature, and is often seen complaining outside of fighting and hates to be scolded on doing so usually talking to the person in an insult in doing so. He hates when someone tells him he is doing something wrong and can also be really rude in situations with know-it-all's, usually telling cruel jokes while doing so.

Though he is very rude and seems to be firm on his beliefs, when it comes to dependability, you wouldn't want anyone else to be on your side. He never lets his friends get hurt unnecessarily, usually placing the world on his shoulders, and though seems like a jerk, thinks about the well-being of them constantly, though he would never show it. He is also constantly training to get stronger, and doesn't stop for anything other than to win, usually driven by stubbornness and stupidity.
Family:
...
Transport:
None
Weapons:
None
Biography:
Born to fight, he was trained by his father in his own fighting style, using several different styles that were used for acrobatics and fighting, of which he implemented into one unique style and named, Wild Blitz, and taught it to the heir of that style his son. His mother often encouraged him to be unique with the style so that he wouldn't be a total copycat.

He often faced many opponents against their own martial arts, and won against them, remaining undefeated, and becoming more and more prone to wanting to go to the outside of the city and Dojo to become his own person. His father was angry however saying that he would have to stay to defend the Dojo, but more and more they argued and fought, they finally came to an agreement, if Daichi could last an entire two months in a training session with his father, a much tougher session than usual, so much so it was hellish.

His father used this as a ploy to train his son much for two reasons, the first so he could send more time with his son, and the second to get him much more ready for the outside world, he in turned became more built, stronger and had much more strength than usual, showing that the training was a success.

One last bout came forth, since he had trained him, his father wanted one more all out battle with his son, one that would be such that they would both remember. Both began to become drained of their power after fighting for two hours, and were exhausted from such, as a result it came down to the wire, as his father had more strength than even he did. Instead he used a new "named" attack of his own, using all the power, they both produced one extraordinarily powerful blow, and in their wake a large crater, it was a tie, and the crater was kept as a reminder of their magnificent battle.

After rest from such a bout, Daichi left his father and mother for one last time before beginning his adventure, and set-off, to see the world, and become a stronger warrior.
Moves/Combat Style:
Wild Blitz Style;
His fighting style is more of one that uses an anything goes style of fighting, but after training allows the user to adapt to different situations, increasing unpredictability of the user to greater degrees as they will do anything to win in the battle they will use dirty tactics as well, this however doesn't reflect the personality of the user, as they will never use allies unless they would not get hurt by such an attack for instance, if the opponent uses a water attack, and the ally close by can reflect or isn't effected by water, he will use his ally to block the attack instead of himself, because that is what he has learned in his mind.

Since the style isn't based on anything in particular, the user is a great physical fighter after the training at least the "normal" training is complete. After ward to seal the deal of the training, the user must train once again for at least two months in grueling training, giving them a higher increase in strength and overall power, thus making them much stronger afterward and truly giving them the title as a master of the "Wild Blitz" style.

Overall, the basis of the style does give the user extreme strength, speed and agility, greatly increasing their abilities, though they become incredibly stupid afterward, because the user is taught not to think or else the style is all for not if they think as they should use whatever means, weaknesses and such should be focused upon to beat opponents. The policy of the style is to never kill the opponent or destroy them.

Insightful Adaptive Combatant;
He is an excellent IN BATTLE observer and adapter tactician.
Skills:
Excellent Close-range Combatant;
He is an extremely powerful close-range combatant, though very idiotic outside of fighting he is a genius of adapting inside of battle. He has enormous speed, agility and reflexes, and can go head to head with groups of people and hold his ground with ease, unless they are also great fighters as well, though he can still hold his ground.
Strengths:
Physical Abilities.
Fighting.
Weaknesses:
Outside of battle, he is a total idiot.
Gullible.
Whenever he thinks too hard, he is strained a great amount, as he doesn't really think when he does things.
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10-25-2009, 08:24 AM
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RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
Hi there! Before I take a peek at your profile I'd like to say that the board will be resetting in a few weeks time; in other words we'll have a new storyline and several new extras. If you still want me to look it over I can but if you'd rather wait for the new round that's fine too. Up to you. ^^
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10-25-2009, 02:15 PM
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RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
Ok then I can do that, I have a few things to fix, also I've been here before.
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10-27-2009, 05:24 AM
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RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
The profile's really well written for the most part. The main thing is that there's some bits where I wish there was more information. I'd consider working on them for the restart.

You spend an awful lot of time talking about this fighting style, but after reading your profile I have a tough time visualizing it in my head. The only unique description we get is "acrobatic maneuvers and super-humanly powerful kicks", which isn't enough for me to go by, really. How about listing some special moves? That would help a great deal.
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10-28-2009, 12:29 PM
Post: #5
RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
You see he hasn't made any yet, he was an apprentice for the stle and an apprentice can't create techniques only learn the style, besides, I'm only making techniques for some powerful finishers. You can't see it because he is very simple, though since his style focuses on kicks, he has great speed, agility and reflexes, and can jump off surfaces and rebound, especially since he has been learning all his life, though of course no where near as fast as Sonic, he is built from the rivalry with Rouge and Knuckles, and his kicks are much stronger than Rouge because he focused his entire life, after all its basically his own ability to fight, so yes he has great physical prowess.
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10-28-2009, 01:51 PM (This post was last modified: 10-28-2009 01:52 PM by Yolanda Riona.)
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RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
I don't see any viable weaknesses to make up for all the strengths he has. When you write weaknesses, you want them to counter balance the same kind of strengths you note. So, if there's a mental strength, there should be a mental weakness. A physical strength, a physical weakness. Right now, all I see is two physical strengths and two mental weaknesses. If he has so much combat prowess, it's unlikely those two weaknesses will make much of a difference unless someone seriously metagames. Let's see some more balance.

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10-29-2009, 03:16 AM
Post: #7
RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
Like what? What could be such that he is physically strong and not mentally, because a heck of a lot of things can go wrong since he isn't as smart as many normal people, down to the wire idiot and gullible, he is built to fight. Maybe if he tries to think too hard, he gets massive headaches.
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10-29-2009, 04:18 AM
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RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
Quote:You see he hasn't made any yet, he was an apprentice for the stle and an apprentice can't create techniques only learn the style, besides, I'm only making techniques for some powerful finishers. You can't see it because he is very simple, though since his style focuses on kicks, he has great speed, agility and reflexes, and can jump off surfaces and rebound, especially since he has been learning all his life, though of course no where near as fast as Sonic, he is built from the rivalry with Rouge and Knuckles, and his kicks are much stronger than Rouge because he focused his entire life, after all its basically his own ability to fight, so yes he has great physical prowess.

After you get accepted, we go by your profile to see if you're playing fairly. People get very nitty gritty about details in fights, so it's VERY important your combat skills are described in lots of detail. Otherwise it's hard to tell if you're sticking to your profile or not. So if you don't want to add moves, at least expand the section that describes his fighting style.
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10-29-2009, 09:17 AM
Post: #9
RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
I don't metagame however, he only uses kicks, and breakdance moves, and many other moves from different styles that focus on movements and legs
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10-29-2009, 10:20 AM
Post: #10
RE: Daichi the Kicking Jackrabbit
Yoli was talking about OTHER people having to metagame to defeat you with the way his strengths are set up.

Secondly, I do appreciate you talking more about your fighting style, but put what you're saying in the profile. If it's not in the profile, we can't refer back to it once your profile's accepted...because these comments are deleted once you're in.
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